It’s so slow and repetitive that I even spaced out long enough for my Kindle to go back into the "screen protector" modus.

There’s quite a few mistakes in grammar, spelling and punctuation marks, too. Also, the begin of the book doesn’t match the rest of what I read either as Byron is super friendly to Winnie (including touching/hugging) while he’s so standoffish shortly afterwards. And what’s with all the leaning against walls? The guy plays rugby, his back muscles should be strong enough to keep him upright.