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A review by iamleighbot
How to Bare Your Neck and Save a Wreck by D.N. Bryn
2.0
Alright, I did really really REALLY enjoy this. It was a little repetitive, sure, and could have used some major editing so I wasn't living the same day on repeat like Groundhog Day but without the actual time loop. It was still a good read with great narration by Simon Dornet
THOUGH I RECEIVED A SPOILER ABOUT HOW NATALIE'S DEATH IS TREATED, I WAS STILL SHOCKED, L.I.T.E.R.A.L.L.Y...S.H.O.C.K.E.D. AT HOW QUICKLY THEY MOVE ON FROM IT. It's literally five lines, a hundred words or so, between Andres finding out his ONLY SUPPORTER is dead to him being ready to fuck. Like. it was so heartless in such a nonsense way. Her death served no purpose to me, besides a few quick mentions until the end of the story. I mean, I guess there's a chance she's around still (the ~mystery of her body is a little intriguing) but that won't make up for how I felt she was treated