This feels haphazardly thrown together. Lots of telling vs showing. Not detailed enough. Insta-lust without enough explanation. Feelings all surface level. He told her he can shift into a dragon and that he hopes she won’t have to see him like that and not 1 PAGE LATER he shifts and it isn’t made into a big deal. It was SO RANDOM. This was my final straw.

Also: “She felt at home, and at the same time, desire bubbled up inside her, leaving her shivering with mad lust.” 
MAD LUST.