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A review by headertime1981
Promised in Fire by Jasmine Walt
3.0
I really enjoyed the story overall. The world felt fresh and intriguing, with its unique elements. I loved how the different types of fae were tied to their respective elements and how they were reflected in their physical traits and powers. The shadow infection was a clever plot point, and the inclusion of dragons and Radiants added an exciting layer to the story. Also, the way dragons were integrated. There’s a lot of great stuff happening here.
It almost felt like two people wrote it: one who did the world-building, story, plot, and politics, and the other who wrote the characters. I struggled with the characters. Other than Einar, I didn't really like anyone, but in particular, Adara. It's becoming a bit of a trope—or maybe it already is—where the female lead refuses to listen to anyone, constantly barking orders despite having no experience and putting friends in peril, and being stubborn for the sake of being stubborn. It doesn't come across as strong or commanding; it just feels like she’s treating the people trying to help her poorly.
I also didn’t fully believe in the romance from Adara’s side. Einar was clearly pining for her the whole time, but Adara seemed to have nothing but disdain for him, aside from a few lustful moments. Then, out of nowhere, she developed feelings for him. That shift needed more subtle development for it to feel believable.
I really enjoyed the world and want to continue reading, but I’m hesitant to dive into two more books if it means dealing with Adara's character as she is.
It almost felt like two people wrote it: one who did the world-building, story, plot, and politics, and the other who wrote the characters. I struggled with the characters. Other than Einar, I didn't really like anyone, but in particular, Adara. It's becoming a bit of a trope—or maybe it already is—where the female lead refuses to listen to anyone, constantly barking orders despite having no experience and putting friends in peril, and being stubborn for the sake of being stubborn. It doesn't come across as strong or commanding; it just feels like she’s treating the people trying to help her poorly.
I also didn’t fully believe in the romance from Adara’s side. Einar was clearly pining for her the whole time, but Adara seemed to have nothing but disdain for him, aside from a few lustful moments. Then, out of nowhere, she developed feelings for him. That shift needed more subtle development for it to feel believable.
I really enjoyed the world and want to continue reading, but I’m hesitant to dive into two more books if it means dealing with Adara's character as she is.